Thursday, December 3, 2015

Differences Between Essays #2 and #3

First of all, the two essays have different genres: #2 was an analysis while #3 was a persuasive essay. Despite this, my basic method of writing these essays remained the same. First, I would decide what I wanted to talk about and in what order. Then I would research the subject to find facts to back my statements up.
                However, I did notice a few differences. For example: my analysis essay had pictures while my persuasive did not. I added pictures of the ads I was analyzing so the reader could see what I was talking about and make their own decisions about the text. I didn’t think such images were necessary for my persuasive essay and searched for graphs instead. Unfortunately I didn’t find the right graph. I learned that I personally find it more difficult to find data charts and other graph than to find interesting ads.

                I also found that was a difference of time placement between the essays. My analysis was on how competition leads to technological advancement by studying ads from camera companies. Because of this, I had to choose ads from the 1800’s, 1900’s, and the 2000’s. On the other hand, my persuasive essay’s cause was to keep the arts in schools. Since this is a current problem, all of my sources were within 10 years of today. 

Persuasive Essay (Final Draft)

Keep Art in School
                Currently, schools all over America are faced with the challenge that inadequate funding presents. When there is not enough money to go around, things have to be cut. When things have to be cut, the arts are usually the first thing to go. But we need art. Art is an important part of the educational system and should remain to be a part of the school curriculum.  It is crucial for developing a child’s brain, helps students do better in school and helps students find their passion and future career. We need art to remain in schools for the student’s development and there are ways to do so.
Art tends to be categorized a hobby and nothing more than a distraction. People who believe this underestimate how much of an impact art has on the general welfare of a student academically and personally. In 2009, “Edutopia” released an article that studied the effects of art in a school system.  They found that “[involvement] in the arts is associated with gains in math, reading, cognitive ability, critical thinking, and verbal skill. Arts learning can also improve motivation, concentration, confidence, and teamwork.” An article written by the Dana Foundation wrote that studies presented at the 2009 neuroeducation summit indicate that practicing the arts such as dance, music, theater, and drawing, increase the brain’s ability to ability to retain attention and improve cognition.
Herbert Kohl, an Oxford and Harvard alumni and author, participated in a book collaboration called Muses Go to School.  In his section he described roles that art would play in education. Those roles include, “[providing] focused discipline and self-discipline through involvement with personal and group activities with high standards taught by devoted teachers [and] integrated personal and academic development and substantial motivation for becoming literate” (xix). Part of a compilation made by the Katy Independent School District added a study that explained that, “…those in the arts curriculum were far superior in creative thinking, self-concept, problem-solving, self-expression, risk-taking, and cooperation than those who were [not].” There are also other studies that show signs of art reducing the rate of high school drop-outs. For example: a study of public schools in New York revealed that “schools with the lowest access [to the arts] also had the highest dropout rates (Onlinecollages.net).” All of these articles agree that art assists in the development of the child’s brain, strengthens values and generates social and academic strengths.
Still, some people may argue that this isn’t good enough. It is a common opinion that studying art won’t get you a well-paying career and we should focus on science and math instead.  This opinion has managed to imprint itself on school curriculum across America. This becomes obvious as subjects like math and science become more and more dominant and the arts fade away. I have to disagree with this opinion. First of all, there are hundreds of careers in artistic field. They range from cake decorator, to art therapist, to animator/filmmaker. Being a designer alone can lead you to the possibility of different work experiences from designing clotheslines, to museum exhibits, to interior decorator or web designer.
Second, we should focus on the arts just as much as subjects like math and science. In fact, some of the highest paying careers require both technological and artistic skill. Multimedia artists and animators have an average salary of $79,000 (Atkisson).  Some of the skills required include a portfolio to show evidence of skill and ability to use computer programs to generate mediums of artwork. Video game designing requires skills from a variety of academic categories. They need to have strong communication, creative writing, theater, management, computer programming, software design and artistic design skills. The average salary pay of a game designer is approximately $71,000 (Atkisson). Architects need to have the ability to problem solve complicated situations creatively and logically. This is an ability that can be developed as a youth through practice of the arts (as mentioned above). Architects need to be able to communicate visually. They do this by using their drawing ability as well as using their knowledge of spatial relationships and visual orientation. They also need a high level math ability in order to calculate accurate distances. The average salary that an architect receives is about $70,000. All of the careers mentioned above had an estimated projected growth of about 15% (Atkisson).
Becoming an architect, a video game designer, a multimedia artist, animator and many other careers command skills from different areas of learning. If we do not have artistic classes as well as math, science and English, then we are robbing students of skills that would allow them to achieve greatness. We would be taking away the opportunity for students to try a variety of new activities and find the one thing they are passionate about.
The biggest advisory to the arts today is funding. How do schools pay for the costumes and props? How can they pay for the clay, pencils and paint? How can they afford to purchase sheet music and repair instruments? Some people suggest that schools should distribute the money they have more evenly amongst the utilities, classrooms, and extra-curricular activities. This suggestion may work for higher funded schools that simply need to adjust their budget, but what do you do if there just isn’t enough money to go around? Solving this problem is even more difficult for low-income schools but there are answers.
When budgets become tight, schools could always apply for grants. Unfortunately, grants can be a gamble. Schools would have to apply for a grant each year. So, if a school receives a grant and makes big plans for the next year, there is always the chance that the next grant could fall through. If that method doesn’t work, then it becomes time for schools to take matters into their own hands and make their own money. This means to keep a steady flow of well-organized profiting fundraisers. Popular fundraisers include bake sales, seasonal carnivals, vending sales at sports games, gift wrapping stations, school wide flea market, and flower sales (White). Art itself can be used for fundraisers. In my younger brother’s fifth grade class, they sell cards, calendars and cook books. On the back of each product is a picture designed by one of the students.  Another idea could be that older, more experienced artists could donate an original artwork to sell at an auctions or raffles hosted at the school.
            The arts are key to having a good schooling experience. There are many modes of art so a student can find the one that is right for him or her. The arts also increase the student’s ability to learn. Music strengthens memory, drawing increases problem solving skills and theater develops social abilities. Working on art can allow students to interact with classmates to create new ideas. Children are the future and these new ideas can become something that changes the world. Having the arts in a school is hard, but I know that it’s worth it.


                 
Citations
"Why Arts Education Is Crucial, and Who's Doing It Best." Edutopia. Ed. Fran Smith. 28 Jan. 2009. Web. 21 Nov. 2015.

Kohl, Herbert R. "Preface: The Necessity of Art in Public Education." The Muses Go to School: Inspiring Stories about the Importance of Arts in Education. New York: New :, 2012

Posner, Michael, and Brenda Patoine. "Cerebrum." How Arts Training Improves Attention and Cognition. The Dana Foundation, 14 Sept. 2009. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.

Bryant, Bob. "The Importance of Fine Arts Education." Katy Independence School District Fine Arts Division. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.

Atkisson, Valerie. "8 Creative Jobs That Pay Over 60K." ArtBistro. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.

White, Kate. "50 Successful School Fundraising Ideas." SignUpGenius. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.


"10 Studies on the Importance of Art in Education." OnlineColleges.net. 6 Sept. 2011. Web. 1 Dec. 2015. 

Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Analysis on Elf's Essay

1.       Claim
Elf’s clearly states her claim of “Humans are the cause of “global warming” (Anthropogenic Climate Change is the preferred term used in her essay) and should be responsible to solve the problem” in the beginning paragraph.
2&3. What support does the author offer for the claim?
She explains how humans are the cause and gives a call to action to the audience to do something about it.  She gives information from nsidc.org, the UK Met Office, and a presentation done by Paul Loubre who has a Phd in oceanography and geology. All of her sources are relevant, up to date, and reliable.
4. How are counterarguments presented?
Doubts others have made on the subject are acknowledged and respectfully refuted with a multitude of information. Although, her answerer tend to be targeted towards a general audience.
5. How does the writer address the reader?

Elf presents her beliefs to the reader in a polite manner so that like-minded people can sympathize. She makes sure to give plenty of scientific and personal background information on the subject and to use inclusive language.   

Analysis of Jacob Kirsch's Essay

1.       Claim
Jacob’s claim is that the ban placed against gay, bisexual and transgender men being allowed to donate blood is outdated and discriminatory and should be uplifted. His stance was made clearly at the beginning paragraph, on the last sentence.
2.       What support does the author offer for the claim?
Jacob’s reasoning are: technology has made improvements on how to detect HIV positive blood, it disrupts equality and the ban decreases the amount of donors who can give the life-saving blood. He supports his clams by giving examples, presenting graphs and citing information from credible sources such as GMHC.org and the FDA forum. His reasoning is plausible and strongly supports his case.
3.       How evenhandedly does the writer present the issues?
Jacob acknowledges counterarguments to his claims while respectfully presenting evidence that refutes them. His provided information is well used in supporting his claims.
4.       What sources does the writer use?
Jacob has used information from credible sources such as, the National Gay Blood Drive website, Article from the Huffington post, The Gay Men’s Health Crisis and the FDA donor history Questionnaire. All of his sources are relevant and up to date.
5.       How does the writer address the reader?

Jacob presents his beliefs to the reader in a polite manner so that like-minded people can sympathize. He makes sure to give plenty of background information and to use inclusive language.   

Persuasive Essay (Second Draft)


Keep Art in School

                Currently, schools all over America are faced with the challenge that inadequate funding presents. When there is not enough money to go around, things have to be cut. And when things have to be cut, the arts are usually the first thing to go. But we need art. Art is an important part of the educational system and should remain to be a part of the school curriculum.  It is crucial for developing a child’s brain, helps students do better in school and helps students find their passion and future career. We need art to remain in schools for the student’s development and there are ways to do so.

Art tends to be categorized a hobby and nothing more than a distraction. People who believe this underestimate how much of an impact art has on the general welfare of a student academically and personally. In 2009, “Edutopia” released an article that studied the effects of art in a school system.  They found that “[involvement] in the arts is associated with gains in math, reading, cognitive ability, critical thinking, and verbal skill. Arts learning can also improve motivation, concentration, confidence, and teamwork.” An article written by the Dana Foundation wrote that studies presented at the 2009 neuroeducation summit indicate that practicing the arts such as dance, music, theater, and drawing, increase the brain’s ability to ability to retain attention and improve cognition.

Herbert Kohl, an Oxford and Harvard alumni and author, participated in a book collaboration called Muses Go to School.  In his section he described roles that art would play in education. Those roles include, “[providing] focused discipline and self-discipline through involvement with personal and group activities with high standards taught by devoted teachers [and] integrated personal and academic development and substantial motivation for becoming literate” (xix). Part of a compilation made by the Katy Independent School District added a study that explained that, “…those in the arts curriculum were far superior in creative thinking, self-concept, problem-solving, self-expression, risk-taking, and cooperation than those who were [not].” There are also other studies that show signs of art reducing the rate of high school drop-outs. For example: a study of public schools in New York revealed that “schools with the lowest access [to the arts] also had the highest dropout rates (Onlinecollages.net).”

All of these articles agree that art assists in the development of the child’s brain, strengthens values and generates social and academic strengths. Still, some people may argue that this isn’t good enough. It is a common opinion that studying art won’t get you a well-paying career and we should focus on science and math instead.  This opinion has managed to imprint itself on school curriculum across America. This becomes obvious as subjects like math and science become more and more dominant and the arts fade away. I have to disagree with this opinion. First of all, there are hundreds of careers in artistic field. They range from cake decorator, to art therapist, to animator/filmmaker. Being a designer alone can lead you to the possibility of different work experiences from designing clotheslines, to museum exhibits, to interior decorator or web designer.

Second, we shouldn’t focus entirely on math and science or the arts. In fact, some of the highest paying careers require both technological and artistic skill. Multimedia artists and animators have an average salary of $79,000 (Atkisson).  Some of the skills required include a portfolio to show evidence of skill and ability to use computer programs to generate mediums of artwork. Video game designing requires skills from a variety of academic categories. They need to have strong communication, creative writing, theater, management, computer programming, software design and artistic design skills. The average salary pay of a game designer is approximately $71,000 (Atkisson). Architects need to have the ability to problem solve complicated situations creatively and logically. This is an ability that can be developed as a youth through practice of the arts (as mentioned above). Architects need to be able to communicate visually. They do this by using their drawing ability as well as using their knowledge of spatial relationships and visual orientation. They also need a high level math ability in order to calculate accurate distances. The average salary that an architect receives is about $70,000. All of the careers mentioned above had an estimated projected growth of about 15% (Atkisson).

Becoming an architect, a video game designer, a multimedia artist, animator and many other careers command skills from different areas of learning. If we do not have artistic classes as well as math, science and English, then we are robbing students of skills that would allow them to achieve greatness. We would be taking away the opportunity for students to try a variety of new activities and find the one thing they are passionate about.

The biggest advisory to the arts today is funding. How do schools pay for the costumes and props? How can they pay for the clay, pencils and paint? How can they afford to purchase sheet music and repair instruments? Solving this problem is even more difficult for low-income schools but there are answers.

When budgets become tight, schools could always apply for grants. Unfortunately, grants can be a gamble. Schools would have to apply for a grant each year. So, if a school receives a grant and makes big plans for the next year, there is always the chance that the next grant could fall through. If that method doesn’t work, then it becomes time for schools to take matters into their own hands and make their own money. This means to keep a steady flow of well-organized profiting fundraisers. Popular fundraisers include bake sales, seasonal carnivals, vending sales at sports games, gift wrapping stations, school wide flea market, and flower sales (White). Art itself can be used for fundraisers. In my younger brother’s fifth grade class, they sell cards, calendars and cook books. On the back of each product is a picture designed by one of the students.  Another idea could be that older, more experienced artists could donate an original artwork to sell at an auctions or raffles hosted at the school.

            The arts are key to having a good schooling experience. There are many modes of art so a student can find the one that is right for him or her. The arts also increase the student’s ability to learn. Music strengthens memory, drawing increases problem solving skills and theater develops social abilities. Working on art can allow students to interact with classmates to create new ideas. Children are the future and these new ideas can become something that changes the world. Having the arts in a school is hard, but I know that it’s worth it.

 

 

                 

Citations

"Why Arts Education Is Crucial, and Who's Doing It Best." Edutopia. Ed. Fran Smith. 28 Jan. 2009. Web. 21 Nov. 2015.


Kohl, Herbert R. "Preface: The Necessity of Art in Public Education." The Muses Go to School: Inspiring Stories about the Importance of Arts in Education. New York: New :, 2012

 
Posner, Michael, and Brenda Patoine. "Cerebrum." How Arts Training Improves Attention and Cognition. The Dana Foundation, 14 Sept. 2009. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.


Bryant, Bob. "The Importance of Fine Arts Education." Katy Independence School District Fine Arts Division. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.

 
Atkisson, Valerie. "8 Creative Jobs That Pay Over 60K." ArtBistro. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.


White, Kate. "50 Successful School Fundraising Ideas." SignUpGenius. Web. 24 Nov. 2015.

 
"10 Studies on the Importance of Art in Education." OnlineColleges.net. 6 Sept. 2011. Web. 1 Dec. 2015.

Thursday, November 19, 2015

In Class Lab 11-19-2015 (Comparing Writings)

Comparing Spriggs’ essay with our homework analysis.

All of our short stories involved picture examples, as well as Spriggs’ essay.
They also all involve logos.
At the beginning all of our short stories and Spriggs’ essay talk about their position and what they will later on talk about in the paper.
Our short stories provide a small part that includes background information.
They involve good reasons with evidence that helps support their claims.
Some of the short stories included opposing views on the situation, whereas some did not.
All included an authoritative tone in the short stories/essay.

All of our stories and Spriggs’ essay appeal to the intended audiences.

Developing My Arguement


1.      I want to prove that the arts are an important part of education and should continue to be an option to students.

2.      This is targeted towards fellow students and teachers and anyone else who cares about education.

3.     I believe that my audience care deeply about the future generation. Because of this I will discuss the effects an educational system without art classes can affect the student in the future and during the school year.

4.      I will present myself as a student who is knowledgeable in her subject. The audience should believe me because I will cite information from trustworthy sources as well as use personal experiences.

5.       Art classes can relieve stress from a student & without art classes; children will lack experience and skill to get them certain careers.
6.       There is no future in a student taking art classes or majors.
7.       My rebuttal would be to present a percentage of careers that involve the arts. I might even include a focus on high paying jobs.
8.       Another counter argument to my position is that art would be a distraction and cannot improve the student academically.

9.       There are research that shows art can reduce stress and improve the brain's memory.
10. Art classes can help improve the student's lifestyle and achieve great things academically. Children are the future. When they grow up, they will be able to benefit society by creating works that inspire, designing faster cars and sturdier buildings or by finding a new way to do things that can revolutionize the world.
 

Responses to: Thiking About the Text (Page 100)


1.       Katherine Spriggs explained how her subject is important on a personal level by writing about her life on rented farm land and her friend, Mr. Lermio, who is a local farmer. She convinced me that buying locally matters by involving global matters as well as local. When discussing topics similar to this, I personally like to know the cause and effect of the solution presented. Spriggs does an excellent job of giving examples of how buying local can change the world.

2.       There are many counterarguments presented throughout Katherine’s essay.  With each counter argument, she responds with facts that support her claim. For example: Katherine acknowledges a counterargument that claims that small farms are less effective than large farms. She responds to this by saying,” Small farms are less efficient than large farms in the total output of one crop per acre, but they are more efficient  in total output of all crops per acre (McCauley).” She further supports her evidence buy citing her information.

3.       I think that the most effective aspect of Spriggs’s essay is that she acknowledges the other point of view.  There are so many counter arguments to the topic she has chosen that she spent about half of her essay discussing them.  An example of this is when she wrote that critics have found negative global effects to buying locally. Then she responds with possible positive effects such as a reduction to the carbon footprint etc. I think that this is a risky move because it can make your position seem less appealing, but if used well it can further strengthen your claim.

4.       Katherine’s photos serve as examples of what she is currently discussing in her essay. For example: she used two photos to show the difference between a small, polyculture farm and a large, monoculture farm.

Thursday, November 12, 2015

Similarities Between Impaired Driving Videos



·         They all targeted their audience on a Pathos level.
·         The other methods (logos and ethos) weren’t used as much.
·         The music created the sad, wistful, and ambiance mood.
·         They seemed like the deaths could have been easily prevented.
·         Target audience: teenage drivers.
·         Close-ups showed emotions on the family member’s faces.

·         After the tragedies, foundations were created to help prevent other families from going through the same hardships.

Tuesday, November 10, 2015

"How Things Mean" In Class Lab 11-10-2015

Peace Sign Buttons

                The first button suggests just peace symbol and fancy writing. The second basically says that peace is love not war, also that there is no love in war. The first button says “Peace”. The second button says “Make Love Not War”. They both have a universal peace sign. People wore these buttons in protest to the wars going on in the 60’s. The button on the left is more relaxed with its wavy font, the one on the right is saying you should do this. It is more bold and specified, also, it is stricter and sharp, and clear cut lines.

Symbols of Patriotism--- USA, Great Britain, and France

                They are suggesting that patriotism comes in different forms. America has a Bald Eagle with an American Flag. Great Britain has a Bulldog and the national flag. Lastly, France has a motto, Liberte (freedom), Egalite (equality), Fraternite (fraternity/brotherhood).  The first image on the left is sharp, with the lines of the flag to the outline of the bird with the black background, it shows how severe and strong the USA is. The eagle represents freedom because birds can go anywhere, they are limitless. Great Britain’s flag in this picture looks like it expands forever. The dog standing atop of it has a proud and big stance. France, the picture to the right might be a little contradictory because there is a security camera in the picture, when the quote contains the word “freedom”.   




THESIS: Every nation has something to represent it that stands for the nation's pride. These three images convey this in the manner explained below.

The bald eagle represents to American citizens strength and bravery. In the image the eagle is integrated with the flag signifying that it has become part of the nation. The bulldog looks like it is guarding flag which is a symbol of the nation, discouraging enemies from challenging them. France's motto is showing its strength by being written in stone.

Tim Wise In Class Lab 11-10-2015


What ARGUMENTS does the author make?
 He has a stance as whether or not we should use the N-word as white people. His position is that white people should not use that word, it is none or our business. Yes by answering these questions we will be analyzing.

How persuasive do you find the argument? It is very persuasive, Tim Wise gives a lot of examples and he is very informed with his argument. He also wrote a book and during the video he would quote some lines from it. None of Tim’s assumptions are questionable, he seems credible. His white friend didn’t understand why he couldn’t use that word even though his friends (black or white) used that word. It like his analogy with your mom, you can say whatever you want about your own mom but no one else dares or you will be very upset. “His Jewish grandfather can make jokes about Jews, but the local Christian church cannot”.

What is the authors STANCE? Tim is very biased. Any argument is biased in its own way. Since Tim is from the south, he knows the community and how they can use the N-word or certain phrases that have a negative effect on certain communities. Tim Wise does consider the opposing views, he talks about how some white people think they are helping the black community by saying it. Tim acknowledged other viewpoints but he only cited his own.

Does the publisher bring a certain stance to the work? The book publisher(s) had to have agreed with Tim and his stance in some way.

Do you recognize ideas you’ve run across in other sources? We know that as white people we don’t have the right to say the N-word.

Does this source support or challenge your own position?  We agree with his

What can you tell about the intended AUDIENCE and PURPOSE?  The audience is mainly white people. The purpose is to convince white people that they have no right to use that word. We are members of the audience addressed. The main purpose is to argue a certain point.





A Summary of Reading Assignment 269-284


We experience arguments every day. They are in the forms of words, written text, music, videos, ads, social media posts and more.  Anything you say or do can represent an argument. In this modern age, many arguments are presented on the internet. Since the argument of a single person can reach anyone all over the globe, the argument the author presents may not be what the audience receives. How arguments can be perceived may also change throughout time. Because of this, you must be very careful when writing an argument.

One of the most important things to know when presented with an argument or making one is whose point of view is this? A person’s point of view heavily affects what their stance is. You also need to know what the issue is, where the facts in the issue are and what does the author want done because of the issue.  Knowing these things let you, the audience, be aware of what is at risk. With this they can make a decision for themselves.  Lastly, there is always a claim or a thesis in an argument. A good author will always be clear on what the claim is to the audience.

A Written Position Expirieance (page 70)


As well as English, I am taking an intro to the art of film class. The final paper in this class is a critique on a movie of our choice.  I made sure to choose a movie that I liked enough to have a lot to say about it. (it is Universal Sudio’s “Oh Brother, Where Art Thou?”) This, as well as the fact that I am very interested in the subject, helps me translate my passion into my writing. Since this is a form of art, it can be received in many different ways by different people.  In my assignment, I am able to express my position on whether the movie fits a certain type of film (like realism or formalism.)  I can decide for myself what a symbol in the movie is and what it means.  I can remark on the use of color and angles. My position is that I think that this is a very well done movie with lots of symbolism and hidden ideologies. Even though this is art, I can’t just state my opinion without a reason.  I still have to support my view with terminology and facts.  With this critique I am clear that I am motivated into writing this by the “voice” I use in the in the critique. I am still in the drafting phase so some improvements can still be made, but for the most part I am evident on my position.

Monday, November 9, 2015

Considering the Medium (page 69)


How do the mediums of the video “Yes, We Can,” contribute to the power of the message?

The voice-over of Obama delivering his speech shows the audience the voice behind the idea. This video was made for the purpose of the 2008 elections. Adding the footage of the original speech is a way to convince voters that Obama is the man who can make this happen.  The images and voices of all the other singers combined in this video symbolize nationwide unity.  Unity is key to the message “yes, we can.” The only time we can make a change and accomplish our goals is when we stand together as a nation. This reminds me of the saying, “United we stand, Divided we fall.” The music in this video is there to connect the message to the audience.  People say that music is very powerful. It can make people feel anger, sadness, joy, motivation and tranquility.   Music lovers all over the world claim that music has the ability to soothe the soul.  Relaying the speech in a lyrical form can reach the audience emotionally in a way that the audience can be deeply “moved” or motivated by the message. Underlining the text, “yes, we can,” and, “hope” emphasizes the key to the point being made in this video.  That yes, we can make a change, but we need to have hope in order to do so.

Thursday, November 5, 2015

11-5-2015 Collaborative Project

English 101
5 November 2015
Prof. Begert


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jOUiAr9-KSo


This video posts a stance that says that we as a generation are too attached to the internet.  The second that it dies everybody freaks out and starts yelling at each other.  This appeals to us because we use the internet all the time every day, and we would go crazy if we didn't have the internet.  Even for this assignment we need to use the internet.  It supports its position very well by being so relatable and funny.  If we had to revise this for a different audience, we would change it to an older generation so maybe they could also better understand the stance this video is making.

By: Wiley Miller

This is a Non Sequitur comic strip. It was printed during the 2015 election season. It appeals to us because it is straight-to-the-point and it makes it very clear what the author’s opinion on politicians are. The images it uses make it easy to see who is speaking. the speech in this strip is used to display expressions and is the medium that is used to express the author's opinion that politicians avoid certain questions and can’t always be trusted. We wouldn’t revise this medium but if we had to choose another medium to use it would be a short video. The video would be able to present the character’s interactions and attitude just as well as the comic strip.   

This cartoon presents its position with visuals as cartoons do. The cop and the group of people are saying don't shoot, but they both have different meanings. The group of people are telling the cop "Don't shoot" because they are at gunpoint, while the cop is telling the media "Don't shoot" because the Media would expose how irresponsible he's being with his power. We chose this ad because it displays how cops have been abusing their power, and how they think it is OK because it is not directly affecting them. If we were revising the cartoon for a different audience, we would probably change the cartoon in a way that showed the cop as helping, even if we don't agree with that. If we were to use it in a different medium, we would have to be more descriptive without words.
It appeals to us because when Hostess said that they were going out of business American's freaked out because Twinkies were no longer going to be made. This ad basically is saying that when that occurred more people were worried about Twinkies rather than more important stuff like saving the Earth. If we were to revise it into a different medium we would do a short video because to a younger generation, videos are more appealing.

Works Cited
Smith, Julian. “Wifi”
Online video clip. Youtube. Youtube, 8 July 2014.
Web. 5 Nov. 2015
Miller, Wiley. "Non Sequitur by Wiley Miller, 9 Sept. 2015. Via @GoComics." GoComics. 9 Sept. 2015. Web. 5 Nov. 2015.
Sack, Steve. "Don't Shoot." Cartoon.
PoliticalCartoons.com 19 Aug. 2014. Web. 5 Nov. 2015
"The Best Political Cartoons Of 2012." Prose Before Hos. 20 Dec. 2012. Web. 5 Nov. 2015.

11-5-2015 In Class assignment


I take a position when discussing...
  • which is the better movie, t.v. series, book or character
  • current political events
  • school essays


People asked me to take a position today when...
  • My mom and sister asks me which clothes they should wear
  • i talk about local government
  • I discuss current world problems
  • When asked what should we make for dinner
  • When planning group activities


Taking Stock of Your Writing Questions

1.        How did you go about analyzing the text? What methods did you use—and which ones were most helpful?
2.       How did you go about drafting your essay?
3.       How well did you organize your written analysis? What, if anything, could you do to make it easier to read?
4.       Did you provide sufficient evidence to support your analysis?
5.       What did you do especially well?
6.       What could still be improved?
7.       Did you use any visuals, and if so, what did they add? Could you have shown the same thing with words?
8.       How did other readers' responses influence your writing?
9.       What would you do differently next time?
10.   Are you pleased with your analysis? What did it teach you about the text you analyzed? Did it make you want to study more works by the same writer or artist?
11.   What are the transferable  skills you can take from this into other writing situations?

Tuesday, October 27, 2015

summary and more of an ad

Summary: This ad is showing a young looking girl with one of the effects of smoking. If you had white teeth before and a beautiful smile then start smoking, you will end up with yellow teeth which doesn’t make you have an attractive smile.

Paraphrase: When people smoke their bodies will pay for it. One of them is getting yellow teeth. With your yellow teeth you are more likely to contract gum disease. A smoker with gum disease is more likely to also lose their teeth, more than the average person

Quotation: “Smoking can cause yellow teeth and serious gum disease that makes it more likely to lose your teeth than someone who doesn’t smoke.”(The Real Cost Campaign)

A Summory and More from "Mad Men: Stillbirth of the American Dream"

Quote:
“As the American dream is packaged for mass consumption, these isolated characters find themselves unnerved by its costs.” (172 Havrilesky)
Paraphrase:
A character called Peggy in AMC’s Mad Men has chosen to not detour from the path of sticking to a single job. Along the way we see her give up some of her personal dreams.  Now she struggles to find the balance between her happiness and her success. (174 Havrilesky)

Summary:
In the review, “Mad Men: Stillbirth of the American Dream,” Heather Havrilesky describes how AMC’s T.V. series Mad Men parallels the transformation of the American dream. She states that the American dream has developed into something that can be bought. This T.V. series mirrors just that with characters such as Don, who gave up his marriage with Betty to commit his life to a new ad firm.  Heather goes on to explain that this reflects a lie that children are being told every day:  you can have everything that you want.  This can lead to a constant sense of something missing or to making life changing decisions based on impulse instead of wisdom.  (In Don’s case, this is true.) Havriesky observes that the character Peggy represents the other side of the scale by sticking to a single career.  We have seen her achieve success on the path she has chosen. Sadly, she has had to give up dreams to get this far. Heather Havrilesky concludes by stating that Mad Men represents the loss of the spirit inside the citizens and the loss of the American dream.


Thursday, October 22, 2015

in class lab 10-22 Analyzing ads

   1)      PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals)
Freedom for Animals
Mercy for Animals
ASPCA (American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals)
  
 2)      People who use products that can make animals suffer. These ads are targeted towards people who are against animal cruelty or towards the common consumer to convince them to be against animal cruelty.
3)      We can tell this by the words they say like: “300,000 animals lab animals suffer each year,” “please don’t wear any fur,” and, “don’t judge animals by their history.”
4)      The purpose is to stop animal cruelty and testing.
5) They ad pictures of animals to make readers feel emotions towards their cause. They added celebrities in some of the ads to draw attention as well. All the ads try to make you feel sympathy, compassion and emotionally moved by their stories.
6) There is a pit bull who had a past of cruelty who wants a home and a sad pig behind bars. Pigs are being crammed in a cage that is barely longer than it is and will never breathe fresh air or see the sun. (ASPCA)

7) These ads are raising awareness to the cruelty of animal testing and abuse and well as wearing fur and judging an animal by it’s past. Overall, they want animals to stop being treated like dirt and start receiving the love and compassion they deserve.

A Summery of "Advertisements R Us."

In her paper titled “Advertisements R Us,” Melissa Rubin analyzes a 1950’s Coca Cola ad explains what advertisements reveal about society.  In the background of the ad there are smokestacks, apartment buildings and skyscrapers set with a bright, optimistic blue sky. Rubin then explains how the background highlights the industrial age that America was going through. She also comments that the smoke stacks are seen positively in contrast with today’s society negative view on such factories. On the bottom-center of the ad there is a large crowd of people enjoying the product.  The author then indicates that the four men in military uniforms at the center of the crowd emphasize the patriotism at that time and the value veterans had in the society.  In addition, the author discusses that the fact that everyone in the ad were white, reflects the racial prejudice, segregation and racial intolerance that had a strong grip on America.  An ad made today would have more diversity represented. This is important because it helps define how much the attitude and personality in the American society has changed over the years.  The author concludes by restating her message: that ads such as this 1950’s Coca-Cola ad can allow people to learn about the ideals and values that are within society at that time.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Answers To: "Advertisements R Us."

1.       Melissa Rubin states in her analysis that the 1950 Coca Cola ad is a window to the mind-set of the past. She convinced me of her statement by using details from the ad itself and explains social outlook that people had in the 1950’s. For example: the smokestacks in the background are drawn in a positive way because it was a sign of advancement in the country.  In the 21st century, we are now aware of the hazards that the smokestacks can cause if unregulated.
2.       Rubin incorporates historical content by including major events that many people can relate to. Example:  Melissa Ruben pointed out that men in military uniforms are at the center of the crowd.  She then goes on to explain that this ad came out a few years after World War Two and near the beginning of the Korean War. This ad reflected that patriotism was at a peak due to the wars and represented the importance and value society had put on veterans.
3.       Other questions I may ask when analyzing an ad are: What was tailored specifically to the target audience? Or: In what ways did the ad boost the importance of their product?
4.       Below is an ad for a Honda Odyssey.  Minivans are associated with being pain, boring, family and being a practical choice.  This ad represents society’s desire to be part of a higher class. The golden chandeliers and rose petals generate a sense of sophistication.  The rose petals along with the glow of the moon and the dazzling sparkles add an air of romance between the couple. The romance, in today’s society, is what keeps a relationship interesting. The words “that special van has come along” also emphasize that buying the practical car can become luxurious.  This is different than the 1950’s Coca Cola ad because it is geared towards society as a whole while the Honda ad is centered on the average citizen’s personal life. The ads also differ on the type of emotion it wants to stir into its audience. The 1950’s ad is centralized on the increase of patriotism while the 2010 ad is focused on romance.




                                     (September 2010 Honda Odyssey ad)